tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1313226061619989578.post1258096582673176303..comments2023-04-27T02:55:13.898-06:00Comments on Tales from the Apocalypse: SFR Brigade Presents (2/1/13)Sarah Shadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02931830964885216356noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1313226061619989578.post-46965278150259893812013-02-07T17:33:50.690-07:002013-02-07T17:33:50.690-07:00He is a cad, is he not? Interesting. He is a cad, is he not? Interesting. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1313226061619989578.post-33890050819209460052013-02-03T21:20:36.192-07:002013-02-03T21:20:36.192-07:00Love the rhythm and flow of the scene and the dist...Love the rhythm and flow of the scene and the distinct dialogue. Wonderful little hint of a mystery to come, too. L. A. Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01198035351359321392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1313226061619989578.post-48814456460191453512013-02-03T15:11:02.794-07:002013-02-03T15:11:02.794-07:00Hmmm, obliged to show her what's hers by right...Hmmm, obliged to show her what's hers by right...Very intriguing!Kyndra Hatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15761591722562940149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1313226061619989578.post-87197425585575453892013-02-02T20:47:15.162-07:002013-02-02T20:47:15.162-07:00The 'Victorian' style of speech comes thro...The 'Victorian' style of speech comes through loud and clear, Sarah. Good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1313226061619989578.post-64785807668064050412013-02-02T20:45:27.227-07:002013-02-02T20:45:27.227-07:00I love your voice here! It's very period for t...I love your voice here! It's very period for the Victorian setting!Laurel Wanrowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07855454763266033002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1313226061619989578.post-56399057958240669362013-02-02T18:24:29.544-07:002013-02-02T18:24:29.544-07:00I get the impression he is really doing her a good...I get the impression he is really doing her a good deed!. Loved it.Melisse Aireshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01478569639424075550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1313226061619989578.post-45432036260142751462013-02-02T10:26:20.182-07:002013-02-02T10:26:20.182-07:00She's rude and he approaches her gently; she&#...She's rude and he approaches her gently; she's polite and he backs off. Interesting dynamic! I wonder if it's meant to foreshadow his inner violence?Eva Cayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11076085941829679350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1313226061619989578.post-42487908191953987872013-02-02T08:51:57.188-07:002013-02-02T08:51:57.188-07:00Interesting twist at the end, "hers by right&...Interesting twist at the end, "hers by right"...makes me want to keep reading for sure!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1313226061619989578.post-22766031432884332752013-02-02T06:55:34.885-07:002013-02-02T06:55:34.885-07:00He's tender with her even as he goes against h...He's tender with her even as he goes against her wishes. Delicious conflict must come from this. <br />:-) Thanks for the excerpt.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com